Merge branch 'DmitrijsF-master-patch-28423' into 'master'

Update zero_downtime.md to fix Vale issues

See merge request gitlab-org/gitlab!75837

doc/update/zero_downtime.md

@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ If you meet all the requirements above, follow these instructions in order. Ther
 | [Geo](#geo-deployment)                                          | GitLab EE with Geo enabled                        |
 | [Multi-node / HA with Geo](#multi-node--ha-deployment-with-geo) | GitLab CE/EE on multiple nodes                    |
 
-Each type of deployment will require that you hot reload the `puma` and `sidekiq` processes on all nodes running these
+Each type of deployment requires that you hot reload the `puma` and `sidekiq` processes on all nodes running these
 services after you've upgraded. The reason for this is that those processes each load the GitLab Rails application which reads and loads
-the database schema into memory when starting up. Each of these processes will need to be reloaded (or restarted in the case of `sidekiq`)
+the database schema into memory when starting up. Each of these processes needs to be reloaded (or restarted in the case of `sidekiq`)
 to re-read any database changes that have been made by post-deployment migrations.
 
 Most of the time you can safely upgrade from a patch release to the next minor
@@ -176,14 +176,14 @@ Upgrades on web (Puma) nodes must be done in a rolling manner, one after
 another, ensuring at least one node is always up to serve traffic. This is
 required to ensure zero-downtime.
 
-Puma will enter a blackout period as part of the upgrade, during which they
-continue to accept connections but will mark their respective health check
+Puma enters a blackout period as part of the upgrade, during which nodes
+continue to accept connections but mark their respective health check
 endpoints to be unhealthy. On seeing this, the load balancer should disconnect
 them gracefully.
 
-Puma will restart only after completing all the currently processing requests.
+Puma restarts only after completing all the currently processing requests.
 This ensures data and service integrity. Once they have restarted, the health
-check end points will be marked healthy.
+check end points are marked healthy.
 
 The nodes must be updated in the following order to update an HA instance using
 load balancer to latest GitLab version.
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ the application.
 
 Before you update the main application you need to update Praefect.
 Out of your Praefect nodes, pick one to be your Praefect deploy node.
-This is where you will install the new Omnibus package first and run
+This is where you install the new Omnibus package first and run
 database migrations.
 
 **Praefect deploy node**
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ node throughout the process.
 
 - If you're using PgBouncer:
 
-  You'll need to bypass PgBouncer and connect directly to the database master
+  You need to bypass PgBouncer and connect directly to the database master
   before running migrations.
 
   Rails uses an advisory lock when attempting to run a migration to prevent
@@ -457,7 +457,7 @@ following command to get address of current Redis primary
   ```
 
 - If your application node is running a version older than GitLab 12.7.0, you
-  will have to run the underlying `redis-cli` command (which `get-redis-master`
+  have to run the underlying `redis-cli` command (which `get-redis-master`
   command uses) to fetch information about the primary.
 
   1. Get the address of one of the sentinel nodes specified as
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@ setting `gitlab_rails['auto_migrate'] = false` in
 
 This section describes the steps required to upgrade a multi-node / HA
 deployment with Geo. Some steps must be performed on a particular node. This
-node will be known as the “deploy node” and is noted through the following
+node is known as the “deploy node” and is noted through the following
 instructions.
 
 Updates must be performed in the following order:
@@ -737,7 +737,7 @@ sudo touch /etc/gitlab/skip-auto-reconfigure
 
 1. If you're using PgBouncer:
 
-   You'll need to bypass PgBouncer and connect directly to the database master
+   You need to bypass PgBouncer and connect directly to the database master
    before running migrations.
 
    Rails uses an advisory lock when attempting to run a migration to prevent