fixed wording on quickstart re: Michels comments

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-Welcome to <strong>Zope</strong> - a new generation of software that 
+Welcome to <strong>Zope</strong>, a high-performance object-oriented 
-we call a web application platform. Like web application servers, Zope
+platform for building dynamic Web applications. Here are some quick 
-provides very high performance and a strong framework for dynamic 
+pointers to get you started:
-applications. Here are some quick pointers to get you started:
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