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         <img alt="Send the Event (1): Confirm the planned Event" title="Send the Event (1): Confirm the planned Event" src="http://img.erp5.cn/user-Howto.Send.Outgoing.Events.Confirm.Event.Action.List.Confirm?format=png">
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           <p>
-            In order to send the Event, first we should verify that everything is correctly set in the Event sheet and then <strong>confirm</strong>
+            In order to send the Event, first we should verify that everything is correct in the Event sheet and then <strong>confirm</strong>
             the
             <strong>Planned Event</strong>
             .
-          </p><p>Red Zone displays the current state of the Event is “planned”. This means that this Event has been created in the Follow Up Ticket, and waiting to be sent to the person set in the Recipient field of this Event. The person set in the Sender field will be displayed as the Sender when the Recipient receives the Event.</p><p>
+          </p><p>The Red Zone displays the current state of the Event is “planned”. This means that this Event has been created in the Follow Up Ticket, and waiting to be sent to the person set in the Recipient field of this Event. The person set in the Sender field will be displayed as the Sender when the Recipient receives the Event.</p><p>
             When you are sure everything is fine, you can then confirm the planned Event. <strong>Open the Action item list</strong>
             as circled in the Blu Zone on the sreenshot. Then
             <strong>click on Confirm</strong>
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@
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           <p>This is the page that asks for confirmation that you really want to send the Event. When an Event is sent, it cannot be modified anymore, so be careful.</p><p>
             You can first <strong>add some comments</strong>
-            if needed, which will be seen only by you team. When you are ready to send the Event,
+            if needed, which will be seen only by your team. When you are ready to send the Event,
             <strong>click on Send</strong>
             .
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           <p>
             After the Event is sent, you will have to check the <strong>Event status</strong>
-            to make sure the Event you created for the campaign Ticket has been sent to the recipient you set. There are
+            to make sure the Event is sent to the intended recipient. There are
             <strong>three documents</strong>
             you need to check in order to make sure that your Event has been sent, and that the Recipient has successfully received the Event:
             <strong>the Event sheet, the Ticket sheet, and the Recipient's document</strong>
             .
           </p><p>
             Now we will first look at the <strong>Event sheet</strong>
-            . After you click on Send in last step, you will be lead back on your Event sheet. As shown in the screenshot, first, you can see in the red circled area that the status of your Event has changed from "Confirmed" to "Sent", which means
+            . After you click on Send in the last step, you will be lead back on your Event sheet. As shown in the screenshot, first, you can see in the red circled area that the status of your Event has changed from "Confirmed" to "Sent", which means
             <strong>your Event has been "Sent"</strong>
             .
           </p><p>
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           <p>
             From the previous step we see that the <strong>Event sheet</strong>
-            shows the Event is sent. After we clicked on the plane icon, we have been lead to the sheet of the message Event's
+            shows the Event is sent. After we clicked on the plane icon, we are lead to the sheet of the message Event's
             <strong>Follow Up Ticket</strong>
             - in our example the Beta Developer Program. So as you can see circled in red on the screenshot of the Campaign Ticket, in the
             <strong>Events list</strong>
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
             <strong>your Event has been sent</strong>
             .
           </p><p>
-            However, are you sure that your Event has been sent to the right person-the Recipient that you set in the Event? And do you want to know how does this message Event behaves on the person document of the Recipient? In order to have a clear look, we will need to access to the  <strong>Person  Document  of  the  Recipient</strong>
+            However, are you sure that your Event has been sent to the right person/the Recipient that you set in the Event? And do you want to know how this message Event is displayed on the person document of the Recipient? In order to have a clear look, we will need to access to the  <strong>Person  Document  of  the  Recipient</strong>
             .
             <strong>Open  the  “Modules”  item  list,  and  click  on “Person”</strong>
             . This will lead you to the person module of your ERP5 instance, displaying the list of
@@ -293,8 +293,8 @@
         <img alt="Check the Event status (3): Reach ERP5 Persons database" title="Check the Event status (3): Reach ERP5 Persons database" src="http://img.erp5.cn/user-Howto.Send.Outgoing.Events.Check.Status.3.Persons.Database?format=png">
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           <p>
-            Now that you have been lead to the Persons database of your ERP5 instance which displays the list of the persons stored in your instance. <strong>Click on the line of the Recipient of the Event</strong>
-            , in our example, we choose one of the recipients to whom the mail message were sent to: Rafaël Dubois.
+            Now that you have been lead to the Persons database of your ERP5 instance which displays the list of the persons stored in your instance, <strong>Click on the line of the Recipient of the Event</strong>
+            . In our example, we choose one of the recipients to whom the mail message was sent.
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         <img alt="Check the Event status (4): In the Recipient's document" title="Check the Event status (4): In the Recipient's document" src="http://img.erp5.cn/user-Howto.Send.Outgoing.Events.Check.Status.4.Recipient.Document?format=png">
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           <p>
-            Now we have been redirected to Rafaël Dubois's Person Document, to check how does the Event behaves in this document, we will <strong>click on the “Event” tab</strong>
-            , as circled on top of the screenshot.
-          </p><p>In ERP5 the Event tab of the person document displays all the Events that have been sent or received by a person. As you can see on the screenshot, the Event we have sent in this tutorial is displayed here. This method helps you follow the relations you have with your clients, suppliers and prospects. If you click on the Event, you will be redirected to the sheet of this Event.</p>
+            Now we have been redirected to Rafaël Dubois's Person Document (the recipient you choose may differ), to check how the Event behaves in this document, we will <strong>click on the “Event” tab</strong>
+            , as circled in the top of the screenshot.
+          </p><p>In ERP5 the Event tab of the person document displays all the Events that have been sent or received by a person. As you can see in the screenshot, the Event we have sent in this tutorial is displayed here. This method helps you follow the relations you have with your clients, suppliers and prospects. If you click on the Event, you will be redirected to the sheet of this Event.</p>
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